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Re: Little Smiles
Last day of exams tomorrow, free from stuffy classrooms for 3 months then I have the most incredibly awesome year ever when i go back in september! fingers crossed for ...
Jun 11, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Four
You added in more Jack, I'm now very, very happy “Exactly. And I care on whether I’ve hurt those feelings or not.” He is so sweet, I hope he does ...
Jun 7, 2009 -
Re: With You
Thats really good, the lyrics are really nice, is that you singing it? xxxx
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Seyonne--The Warden
That is really good, yu have a real talent, keep drawing! xxxx
May 30, 2009 -
Re: Another Teen Pregnancy Story, Part 2
This is really good, I didn't find any mistakes! I like Elaine, she seems really sweet, is she going to be included in it more? PM me when you have ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Bloodlust - Chapter Four
First review! Thought I ought to return the favour, since you were nice enough to review mine! As I stood looking at the surrounding forest, a shiver worked its way ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: In 24 Hours
this is good, i think you should stick with it. Your english is very good considering it's not your first language. I'd love to read more of it,, Pm me ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: New Moon Parody
JACOB: [is vibrating] I shall change into a werewolf! [to himself] Wait, what am I going to about Bella? I guess I should drive her- Vibrating, hehe BELLA: [faints] ALICE: ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Night visitor
I really hope you continue this! this is really good, PM me when you have the next bit posted! xxxx
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Watching Me
Finally the smoke cleared and I could see the devastation that remained. I ran, desperately trying to block out the images that were running through my head. I could hear ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Vampire Super Models
Hiya, ok review time! Everyone else has pointed out the mistakes, but I found this one teensy one. He was the most gorgeous man in history and the best photographer ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Another teen pregnancy story:)
Oh, darn, all the mistakes seem to be pointed out. I guess I'll just have to tell you what I thought of it. *sigh* If I really have to. It ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Rebirth Chapter 4
Hiya, Right, review time! Now I as well as you would love to think that he’d seen the error of his ways and was now a new man but we ...
May 24, 2009 -
Re: Immortality- The Prologue
I really like this. You give such detailed description, but let the reader imagiine somethings for themselves. I cant wait to see where you go with this. PM me when ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Nicknames!
Thank you all so much, I really wasn't expecting so many people to reply to this! Vivacious, thanks for the link!
May 3, 2009
